The unlimited use of cars may cause many problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce the problems should we discourage pEople to use cars.
As the using of cars brings the humankind several benefits, it also addressing many problems to society.
These problems would include the issue related to safety when driving cars. Every year, people published an estimated number of deaths around the world and the information in horrified. More than 3000 deaths per day had been reported to caused by car accidents, and that number means approximatedly 1 million people died a year in a road accidents. Aside from this problem, the unrestricted use of cars also accompanies with the unlimited production of carbon dioxide and other emission to the environment. it is general knowledge that car creates a significant amount of exhausted fumes, and it is one of the factor that cause air pollution which lately becomes a contribution to green house effect. For example, big cities like Shanghai and Beijing are being air-polluted mostly becaused the boundless using of cars. Additionally, more and more traffic jams also appeared in big cities like the two example above since the tremendous number of cars are being used.
There are many solutions have been dicussed. While some people propose that supporting people to use fewer cars is the solution, I have an opposed idea. cars is flexible. Its benefits to the human is something that cannot be denied. Without cars, people will be less accessible to places and less proactive in daily acitivities. In such cases, limit the using car reveals to be an unrealistic solutions. I deem that it would be a better way if car’s manufacture can invent cars that are friendly to the environment such as electric cars like Tesla from Elon Musk. Furthermore, the government could consider to build extra underground systems in order to reduce traffic jams, and safety issue when driving shall be taken as first priority when licesing somebody.
In conclusion, I suggest three solutions for three problems that caused by the overuse of cars.
- Some people believe that all the children in school are require to learn at least one foreign language. However, others say that those who are not talented do not have to learn. What is your opinion? 67
- The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010 70
- The graphs below show information about electronic games in South Korea in 2003. 73
- The chart below shows the changes in car ownership in Great Britain between 1961 and 2001 61
- The unlimited use of cars may cause many problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce the problems should we discourage pEople to use cars. 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12225705329 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73925232623 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595611285266 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7005566238 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1176470588 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7647058824 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76470588235 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291771326899 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890528406963 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602704689824 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18588455463 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356142435674 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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