On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter- describe the item you lost- explain how you lost it- tell the

Dear Sir,

I am writing to you to inform about a loss I incurred while on my vacation to Bangkok. My name is John Doe and I had recently been on a vacation trip to Bangkok. I booked my trip through Makemytrip travel portal and I had opted for a fully insured travel policy of your company (AXA Insurance) on this trip.

I have lost my gold chain while in Bangkok. I’m sure it was lost while I took a swim in one of the swimming pools in the hotel we stayed. The Hotel authority and the pool staff tried to look for the missing ornament, but to no avail. I had informed the Hotel authority about the incident and have the incident report with me to substantiate the matter.

As I am insured and have valid proof of the missing item, I request you to please look into this matter and help me to get the compensation for the lost item. I have attached the copy of the Hotel incident report , our booking details , a picture of the gold chain which was lost and the cctv footage of the pool area when the incident happened with this letter.

I hope to get a favorable reply from your side soon. Please let me know if I need to furnish anymore detail to begin the investigation.

Yours Sincerely,
John Doe.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Line 8, column 235, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he incident happened with this letter. I hope to get a favorable reply from you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34497816594 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36518193129 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532751091703 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3499971274 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9166666667 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0833333333 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234038829013 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758809149826 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705341931369 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121693288331 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793449910991 0.0580467560999 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.