On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter- describe the item you lost- explain how you lost it- tell the

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On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.

Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter

- describe the item you lost
- explain how you lost it
- tell the insurance company what you would like them to do

Dear sir/ madam,

I am writing to inform you that I have lost my cell phone on last weekend while I was travelling by train.

The Apple brand cell phone of model name iPhone X, which have grey in colour and six-inch screen size. I have purchased this phone one year ago in price of $ 299. Last week, I was travelling to New York from Washington by train, when I reached to New York station, I was finding my phone for booking cab, I noticed that the phone was not there in my bag. I called to my number from telephone booth situated at platform but it switched off. I had already made an insurance policy for this phone when I purchased it.

I would like to claim the insurance policy of this phone so I request you to give the details that you require for claim. I am looking forward to hear from you

Thanks
Yours Faithfully
Nisarg Chauhan.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: grey
...hone of model name iPhone X, which have grey in colour and six-inch screen size. I have purcha...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$299'.
Suggestion: $299
...sed this phone one year ago in price of $ 299. Last week, I was travelling to New Yor...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I was finding my phone for booking cab, I noticed that the phone was not there i...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... for this phone when I purchased it. I would like to claim the insurance polic...
^
Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...the details that you require for claim. I am looking forward to hear from you ...
^
Line 7, column 144, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...require for claim. I am looking forward to hear from you Thanks Yours Faithfully ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m. I am looking forward to hear from you Thanks Yours Faithfully Nisarg Chauha...
^^^^^
Line 10, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ar from you Thanks Yours Faithfully Nisarg Chauhan.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 700.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.375 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24136697943 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61875 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.1048270678 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158461406024 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706675377185 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709295552844 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142133521716 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079560853949 0.0580467560999 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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