Although you have never studied computing, you have always been interested in computers – you buy magazines about them, and you have taught yourself many skills on your computer at home. You have just read a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for those people who have studied computing at college or University.
Write a letter to the Enrolment Officer asking if you can enroll, explaining your circumstances and asking if he/she will make a special exception for you
Dear Sir,
I am writing to enquire about advance computer course at your computer Institute. The news paper advertise related to computer course lead me to write letter here.
First of all, I was very keen to learn computer science when I was in school. My father fixed me a brand new computer on my birthday when I turned to eighteenth. Although, I had not basic knowledge of computer like how it work and how to start the computer. I acquire the basic knowledge of computer science by reading books and related magazines. The theory and techniques mentioned in the books was very useful for me as beginners.
As mentioned above i gained the plenty of skills and knowledge of computer at home. Now I want tho learn an advance computer course which can fulfill my brought future. I have read the advertise in news paper about advance course in your stitute, but it states that the course is only for those people who have studied computer at college or university
I would be so grateful if you can enrol me in advance course. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Thank you
Your Faithfully
Nisharg Chauhan.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
... course at your computer Institute. The news paper advertise related to computer course le...
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Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'works'?
Suggestion: works
...basic knowledge of computer like how it work and how to start the computer. I acquir...
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Line 7, column 20, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...me as beginners. As mentioned above i gained the plenty of skills and knowled...
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Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... fulfill my brought future. I have read the advertise in news paper about advance course in y...
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Line 7, column 199, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...ht future. I have read the advertise in news paper about advance course in your stitute, b...
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Line 7, column 353, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tudied computer at college or university I would be so grateful if you can enrol ...
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Line 9, column 64, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...if you can enrol me in advance course. I am looking forward to hearing from you....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71717171717 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49815767235 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580808080808 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1638288234 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8333333333 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319066059901 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108886014251 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782890761356 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168427110019 0.12726935374 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05546745575 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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