Why do you think teachers give homework to students? How important is it for students to have homework Are there any other ways of revising lessons? Perhaps homework should be abolished. Give your opinion about this.
People have different views as to whether or not students are given homework. while some strong arguments do not agree with the setting of homework. In my perspective, it is necessary for education development.
there are some reasons why homework is an unnecessary burden on children. Firstly, children may have to spend whole daytime at school. If they keep learning at home, it might lead to overload for their mind. Furthermore, to full development, not only the knowledge they study in an educational institution, but also they need to develop their physical and soft skills, that they could not know in exercises. Secondly, homework will be able to put more pressure on student and may not improve educational outcomes. For example, some countries as Finland, do not give any homework for their students but they still on top International educational league tables.
On the other hand, I believe that homework play an important role in education. First of all, it encourages independent learning and problem-solving for the student. they have to practice and remember almost knowledge taught by their teacher at school to deal with exercises by themselves. For instance, with some subjects as math, students consolidate their understanding. they can learn how to tackle their problem independently. In my point of view, it is important for children to develop an independent study habit because this prepares them to work alone as adults.
In conclusion, while there are have some drawback to giving homework, I still believe that the benefit outweighs than that view.
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- Why do you think teachers give homework to students? How important is it for students to have homework Are there any other ways of revising lessons? Perhaps homework should be abolished. Give your opinion about this. 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21653543307 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95607425089 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59842519685 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2556674723 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8125 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3125 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287201387937 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992224405199 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717817058104 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186672685157 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230936122744 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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