In some countries, the governments encourage industries and business to move out from large cities to regional areas. Do you think that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
Over the last few years, there are a number of governments encouraging factories and companies to relocate their offices in the suburbs. It is true that these changes will bring both the benefits and drawbacks, but I do believe that the advantages are more significant.
On the one hand, there are several disadvantages if industries and businesses are located in areas outside city centers. To begin with, the transportation of goods and services could slow down, because the infrastructure is better in big cities. This may have a negative effect on the quality of products. Another reason is that in big cities, there are the majority of worker being well-trained, whereas a number of residents in the countryside are farmers or craftspeople. Therefore, they may lack skilled workers.
On the other hand, it is essential for the governments to push the heading executives of big companies and industries moving into regional areas. Firstly, a range of residents probably face health problems. A large amount of exhausted fumes and litter were produced into the air and rivers from factories. This is a key factor leading to air pollution and water pollution. Consequently, it causes a variety of illness, such as lung cancer and respiratory diseases. Secondly, the costs are lower than in regional areas. As a result, it is easier to expand the scale of companies. Furthermore, it will provide more employments to boost the standard of living in the suburbs. In short, it seems to me that the advantages outweigh the drawbacks because of the arguments above.
In conclusion, I hold the belief that the relocation of industries and business bring more the advantages than the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'majorities'?
Suggestion: majorities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, in conclusion, in short, such as, as a result, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14440433213 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03003596688 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581227436823 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5305010731 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8235294118 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2941176471 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5294117647 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22092006727 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504249073169 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060060327537 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11858445708 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480276513407 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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