Nowadays, more and more people want to travel to remote areas such as the South Pole. Do the advantages of this type of travel outweigh the disadvantages?
More and more people are interested in going to places which are not yet discovered much such as the Poles. While this trend has several drawbacks, I still believe it brings more benefits.
On the one hand, there are many reasons why people claim that going to long-distance areas is a bad idea. Firstly, as it is not easy to get to those places due to undeveloped transportation, people might have accidents on the way. For example, people need to go by boat for a few days to reach the South Pole from the US, therefore they might be in need of food and water if the boat is broken. Secondly, people are likely to pay a great amount of money for the trip because there are only a few expensive tours for wealthy people at the moment. As a result, passengers on the trip might need to spend all of their saving and have not enough money for paying their accommodation fees after finishing the trip.
On the other hand, I support the view that traveling to remote places brings numerous advantages. First, this kind of tour brings great feeling to the tourists, which helps them release stresses and create more exciting moments in their life. If people travel to familiar places only, they might find it boring as they are not different from their country and they can visit those places through videos and newspapers. Furthermore, exploring new locations which are still not yet well-known could encourage people to contribute to its development. For instance, after going to the North Pole, an American billionaire decided to build a small town there in the 2000s.
In conclusion, while traveling to remote destinations has its own disadvantages, I am of the opinion that this is a positive development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75838926174 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64722353453 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55033557047 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4211079237 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.076923077 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.9230769231 7.06120827912 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21495727541 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757300666933 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540339641553 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144623859019 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534544029635 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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