Dear Mrs James,
I am writing to you to express my sincere apologies for the inconvenience caused to you by activities at home.
Ever since I have moved into this house, new problems are occurring every now and then. Last month there was some leakage in the basement room and more recently there was a severe issue related to the wooden work. It had to be rectified by a renowned agency, however their available timings coincided with my office hours and I had to request them to come in late evening hours.
Despite tools and equipment used by them were pretty noisy, they were extremely efficient. The team finally finished the work in span of few days. I am really sorry for all the problems that you and your family had to face because of all this.
In future, I will make sure that visiting mechanic and technician should not be carrying any devices creating that much sound. Moreover, I could try to get it done either on weekends or during day time.
Please accept my apologies and I am looking forward having a cup of coffee at my place this Sunday evening.
Yours sincerely
Hary
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 69, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
... this house, new problems are occurring every now and then. Last month there was some leakage in t...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the future'?
Suggestion: In the future
...ily had to face because of all this. In future, I will make sure that visiting mechani...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, look, moreover, really, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65306122449 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36137970668 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.709183673469 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4240829343 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9090909091 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15609609954 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569511116158 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734476133516 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0685238515356 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526121637811 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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