Nowadays, people are concerned more and more with how to have a healthy diet. Opinions are divided as to whether we should get rid of meat in everyday meals or not. Personally, I do not subscribe to the theory that all people should follow a meat-free diet, while I cannot deny its benefits.
For a number of reasons, it would be wrong if people do not eat dishes made from meat. Firstly, an appropriate meal must have all sorts of necessary nutrients, and that vegetables only contain a few of them. Although the human body also could absorb a certain amount of protein, for example, from beans, potatoes and so forth, some specific proteins are just found in lean meat. Moreover, the concentration of nutrients in plants is much less than that in animal food. Secondly, not all of us are suitable for vegetarianism. Vegetarians are required to spend a great deal of time preparing meals with a complicated recipe once they want to have scrumptious dishes. Meanwhile, some chose to eat out at restaurants serving meat-free foods. As a result, having a diet with no meat is only suites someone who has plenty of time and money.
On the other hand, vegetarians have some merits from their eating habits if they can manage to have a balanced diet. Because vegetable nutrients would be digested and absorbed much easier compared to those in meat, especially proteins. Besides, there are persons who must follow a vegetarian's diet due to clinical indications. Case in point, patients with kidney diseases need to cut down on the intake of proteins as an effective method to relieve their symptoms.
To conclude, I believe that we should not have a diet as a vegetarian's even if it benefits us sometimes.
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- The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984. 84
- Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree? 84
- We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 84
- Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...ve a healthy diet. Opinions are divided as to whether we should get rid of meat in everyday m...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...et, while I cannot deny its benefits. For a number of reasons, it would be wro...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...one who has plenty of time and money. On the other hand, vegetarians have some...
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Line 7, column 58, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a vegetarian' or simply 'vegetarians'?
Suggestion: a vegetarian; vegetarians
...lieve that we should not have a diet as a vegetarians even if it benefits us sometimes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83904109589 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70532121958 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609589041096 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2604377841 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.3125 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302416656297 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859332779738 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595537002667 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182699350842 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200685774837 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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