Turtle excluder device
Here, the article and the lecture both are about turtle excluder device which is incorporated with the net to provide the passage for turtle to escape. The article claims that this device has been criticized for their usage for many reasons. In the lecture, the professor challenges the claim made by article with positive response against criticism.
To began with, the article avers that turtles get caught within the net rarely as once in month. So, TED cost is too much for them to use, to save one turtle. In the lecture, this specific explanation refuted by the professor, she thinks that it is true that turtle get caught rarely but there are thousands of boat in ocean. While considering about thousands of boat, more than thousands of turtle get caught every year. Apparently, this is needed to remark when these turtle spices are endangered which will not be able to recover.
Second, the article suggests that there are alternative methods to protect them besides using TEDs. With this method they can shorten the time limit for nets in underwater. the professor, however rebuts this by mentioning that government can not keep record of time for every single boats, specially in middle of ocean. It is easy for them to check with TEDs when the boat is leaving. So, this idea about release the turtle from the net before time would not be possible.
In the end, the article posits that TEDS are not that effective for larger species of endangered sea turtle. They can not escape from the net even if the nets are equipped with TEDs. In the lecture, the professor's position is that space needed for escape can be adjusted with modification of the TEDs features. Apart from this, he notes that once these devices detect the size of turtle they adjust the space and it will no longer problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 270, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'rarely' is usually put before the verb 'caught'.
Suggestion: rarely caught
... thinks that it is true that turtle get caught rarely but there are thousands of boat in ocea...
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Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... the time limit for nets in underwater. the professor, however rebuts this by menti...
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Line 4, column 36, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le. In the end, the article posits that TEDS are not that effective for larger s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, but, however, if, second, so, while, apart from, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 30.3222958057 152% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1373.03311258 109% => OK
No of words: 313.0 270.72406181 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76357827476 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29601567567 2.5805825403 89% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507987220447 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 419.366225166 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 2.5761589404 311% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5397971107 49.2860985944 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4 110.228320801 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 21.698381199 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06452816374 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.3589403974 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.2367328918 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 63.6247240618 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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