Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and in your letter:
- invite him/her to the public event in your country
- Describe the public event
- Explain about other plans you have for your friend when he/she will visit
Dear Ben,
How're you ? I hope you're coping well with the scalding weather of Canada ? Sorry I've not been writing you letter in a while. I've been busy with office chores. Anyway, I'm writing to let you know that the Lagos State governor-elect, his excellency Samson James will be sworn in on the 15th of June 2019, and it will be a fascinating experience if you witness it.
Although I know you dislike an environment consisting of hordes of politicians, I would be happy if you can be kind enough to take part in this ceremony.
Let me tell you more about it. It will be held at the National Stadium in Lagos and will kick off at exactly 12:00 noon. Interestingly, a lot of top politicians will be attending the event. Clearly, it is a big event, therefore, you can be assured of maximum security.
After the event, I have some other plans though. Since you have soft spot for leisure, I would like us to visit some places of interest such as the National Park and Museum. Also, it would be nice to host you at the Golden Bar on the island. We can hang out there and have conversation.
Anyway, let me know what you think about it.
Your friend,
Collins
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...not been writing you letter in a while. Ive been busy with office chores. Anyway, I...
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...e been busy with office chores. Anyway, Im writing to let you know that the Lagos ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, if, so, therefore, well, while, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 963.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51312995842 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626168224299 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.1650807121 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.1875 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.375 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 4.34317383033 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203500193167 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768073053086 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726145012514 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0858339575221 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409519218841 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.