music brings people of different cultures and ages together. Do you agree or disagree?
does the sound of a serie of accords has the power to unite people across cultures and ages? it has been long argued that music is able to make people put differences aside and share something in common. At least, for a moment. In the following paragraphs I will state the reasons that make me believe in music's people uniting capabilities.
In the first place, in the western hemisphere, it is commonly understood that some artists bands have achieved a status of all-time classics. it has even been estimated that every 7 seconds there is a Beatle's song been playing in a radio somewhere in world. The taste for this bands is shared between the young and the old, and it does not go away as time passes by. Quite the contrary, people tend to enjoy this music more as they grown older. Despite having acquired the taste for this old songs at an early age.
Secondly, musicians understand music is governed by math and the laws of physics. The strong relation between music and nature allowed Bethoveen to compose beatiful melodies that are still enjoyed by people of all sort of ages. Alhough, more than 400 years have paased since they were composed by an artist who could never hear his own works because he was deft. How is this possible? The only possible reasons being that humans' taste for music is deeply engrained in our own DNA, and therefore, shared by people all around the globe.
On the other hand, it is true that there are many local music genres virtually unknown outside their countries of origin and which are hardly enjoyed by foreigners. If the taste for music is something all humans share in common, shouldn't we expect all people to like the same type of music? An interesting fact is that we mostly do. When experts analyze music from different countries, they are able to recognize the same building blocks from contemporary music in music from all eras. These findings reinforce the idea that our taste for music and its building blocks are something shared by humanity as a species .
To sum everything up, the fact people from all places and ages are able to enjoy the same alltime classics and that all music is built from the same building blocks and rules, is strong indicator of its potential to unite people from all ages and cultures, for once, under a same flag or ideal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, at least, sort of, it is true, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1917.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68704156479 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2957439348 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542787286064 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0166139998 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.85 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.45 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203441022858 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631430736372 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521572240488 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123496566317 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054369940271 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.