Eating sweet foods produces acid is in mouth, which can cause tooth decay(high acid levels are measured by low PH values)
The given line graph illustrates that eating excessive amount of sweets damage teeth and it is measured in changing of ph values. Overall, it can be seen that tooth decay does not occur, when acid level is over 5.5 and in terms of eating sugar, this level decrease dramatically, while it become stable 40 minutes later.
Firs of all, depending on type of sweet, acid level alter differently. Thus, in the case of consuming fruit and cane, PH values diminish considerably and reach at around 4 and 3, respectively during first 5 minutes and both of trends commence to increase gradually. Furthermore, acid level grow and reach level at which tooth decay is unlikely 15 minutes later, when people eat fruit. In addition to this, it happen for cane sugar 25 minutes later. By contrast, acidity is constant before rise sharply for second 5 minutes, when individuals utilise honey for nourishment and stay at normal value only after 5 minutes.
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...ople eat fruit. In addition to this, it happen for cane sugar 25 minutes later. By con...
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...y at normal value only after 5 minutes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, thus, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 782.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8875 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58478118029 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.547539520022 128% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7348069304 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.714285714 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304210940635 0.215688989381 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131062677558 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871485495993 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245479553877 0.15604864568 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259341069762 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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