Employers should give its staff at least four weeks of holidays a year to make employees do better in their job. To what extend do you agree or disagree
Getting holiday is one of the essential things for our mental health and work efficiency. it is sometimes thought that employers should give workers at least four weeks break a year. Personally, i completely agree with this statement because of all people need motivation and reducing stress level.
To begin with, people always need some motivation resources. Considering that human beings fed up with their works after prolonged work period, employers of companies should give break their staff. In that case, they are able to recharge their battery in vacation, which is enable them in order to travel or be in charge of different exhilarating activities. For example, staff members have a rest in vocation and they determine motivated .
Secondly, nowadays, majority of people burdened with overloaded work issues and it is definitely challenging to juggle with family and work responsibilities. As consequence, they might feel pressure and compensated with vacation reduce stress level of people. Thus, employees work hardly during the year and they become exhausted because of pressure on their shoulders. In terms of taking holiday, they uplift their spirit by entertaining. For instance, attending to relaxed activities such as concerts or travelling renew their brain. According to researchers, however people encounter with difficulties in order to concentrate on work after long term holiday, it increase efficiency of workers.
In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinions, in my point of view, bosses should give a holiday, which is a chance their staff in order to take their mind of things and become more enthusiastic for working.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, while, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38846153846 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88099167548 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626923076923 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9516850383 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.071428571 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185181504214 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674728378511 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821570391411 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12940461218 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480249462185 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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