Some people think that printed books are not necessary in the digital era because writing can be stored electronically. Others think printed books still play an important role. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
Although, it is sometime thought that to print the books is not essential, others believe published books possess important role. Personally, in my opinion, e-books should be more preferable comparing digital books.
On the one hand, development of technology is inevitable and it alter human beings' habits considerably. Thus, reading books from electronic devices is more convenient, considering that some books are massive and carrying out these books is unable for people. For example, some books are designed with dense pages and solid cover pages, which make them difficult to carry everywhere. Moreover, saving books electronically reduce paper consuming remarkably, that is enabled to avoid desertification or decrease cutting down trees for this reason. Therefore, undeniable facts illustrate that every year tones of trees cutting in order to utilise making printed books and it leads to vital problems over the world such as global warming.
On the other hand, individuals are over-enthusiastic in order to take advantage of modern developed technology,though they have some negative impacts on human beings. Hence, published books are favorable for majority of people at present because of profound negative effects to human health, such as radiation level or diminishing function of eyes. In that case, they make a great effort in order to get benefit from printed books. Furthermore, while costs of some books are exorbitant, some witness history books should storage in museums in future.
In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinions, in my point of view, people should have a tendency to read e-books from electronic devices, because of publishing books leads human beings to forthcoming consequences, such as global warming or some diseases.
- The graph and table show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities 78
- some people believe that computers and the internet carry more weight than traditional education in children's study. Some others believe that traditional schooling and teachers are still essential and more effective. Discuss both viewpoints and give 73
- Some people think that printed books are not necessary in the digital era because writing can be stored electronically. Others think printed books still play an important role. Discuss both view and give your own opinion. 61
- Nowadays, most countries improve the standard of living through economic development. But some social values are lost as a result. Do you think advantages of the phenomenon outweigh the disadvantages? 78
- Nowadays most of people learn academic study in university, but others think we should encourage to learn vocational skills more, do you agree or disagree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'alters'?
Suggestion: alters
...ment of technology is inevitable and it alter human beings habits considerably. Thus,...
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Line 2, column 207, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... considering that some books are massive and carrying out these books is unable f...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , though
...advantage of modern developed technology,though they have some negative impacts on huma...
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Line 3, column 540, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...history books should storage in museums in future. In conclusion, while people may vary ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49816849817 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93394017282 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0630971301 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.083333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26581098051 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101893957698 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630178486818 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184763965801 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551707674212 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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