Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others however believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is irrefutable that, lifestyle has undergone drastic changes over a couple of Years. An increasing concern for many authorities around the world is the diminishing health of their citizens due to poor diet. While, some people believe that government should take be responsible for ameliorating the health of their nation, others believe that it is up to individuals. I would like to account for both sides of the argument.
There is no doubt that not only everyone should take responsibility to maintain their health but also they should foster to those responsibilities as healthy diet is imperative to achieve healthy body. adults have their own choices about what they eat and the exercise they do. If an individual is health conscious then the person will adapt healthy eating habits to keep up health but there also have some people who does not care about good food,they only care about foods that satisfy their taste buds. So they usually end up having junk foods. Children these days are also becoming less healthy. However, parents are the ones who provide their juveniles meals so, it is their responsibility to ensure these meals are nutritious and propel them to avoid junk foods.
There is also a case for advocating the attention of the intervention of the state. People these days do not get enough time to cook healthy foods for themselves as well as for their families because of their hectic schedule. Due to the increased pace of life, life has become stressful. Everyone is competing to get a better life and thus they are cutting back on healthy diet. They do not have enough choice rather than depend on fast foods that constitutes high sugar,salt and fat. Government should regulate the ingredients of such food items. Some government also spend humongous amounts of money on treating health problems of their citizens. It would be coherent to spend the money to preventive measures such as campaigns to persuade exercise and healthy diet.
To recapitulate, I would argue that although individuals must take ultimate responsibility of their health, it is also the exertion of authorities as only they can supply good quality foods, which openly encourage a healthy diet. It is only through this combination that can improve people's health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, thus, well, while, as for, no doubt, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1898.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03448275862 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68752760641 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535809018568 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4404774962 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.85 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367175047375 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986296966038 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924583192067 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22813288392 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559290451955 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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