Nowdays, many people spend less and less time at home.
What are the causes of this? What are the effects of this on individuals and on society?
The time during which people are present at home is steadily declining in recent years. Undoubtedly, there have been dozens of factors are attributable to this change. The present essay will discuss artificial lighting and today’s competitive world as two specific causes of this situation. Finally, its repercussions for both individuals and society will be argued herein.
These days, urban areas are fully illuminated thereby keeping cities alive even overnight. That people are enabled to stay outdoors until late at night. Moreover, different parts of the world now are linked and this created a competitive atmosphere. To be successful in this competitive world, one is obliged to work harder. For example, in order for students to be admitted in reputable universities, they have to acquire more skills to enhance their Curriculum Vitaes. This requires to attend extra courses beyond conventional ones. People thus curtail the time they spend indoors to work harder.
Limiting the amount of time we spend at home has profound influences on human societies and individuals. The more we spend outside of the house, the less chance we have of communicating with family members, consequently families have not adequate time to cement their relationships. In fact, loss of close relationships inside a family has a detrimental effect on the wellbeing of society. Besides society, individuals have less opportunity to rest. Home is generally known as the best place for relaxation as well as sleep. Statistics demonstrate that people sleep currently about 2 hours fewer in comparison with the previous century. This means that most people are now suffering from sleep deprivation, therefore, they have not sufficient rest.
To conclude, it is imperative to keep a balance between a period of time when we are at home and we are not. As noted above, artificial lighting in the streets and the need of working harder keep people from coming back to home. This essay also argued lack of enough rest and functional family relationships as dire consequences of staying outside.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 486, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'attending'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: attending
... their Curriculum Vitaes. This requires to attend extra courses beyond conventional ones....
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Line 4, column 60, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... imperative to keep a balance between a period of time when we are at home and we are not. As ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, finally, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28614457831 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90758614535 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593373493976 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2839720736 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.5714285714 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8095238095 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52380952381 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292482134034 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774223004348 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435742127675 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167941096801 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388983303238 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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