Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. While other people think that taking part in individual sports is better, like tennis or swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

From beginning, sport has an important role in human life. Although, Some people argue that team sports such as football, cricket are favourable than individual sports like tennis or swimming. I agree that team sports have better results than individual sports. In this essay i will support the same with examples.

In one hand where Individual sports does not teach team work, on other hand success of team sports mostly depends on team work.In sports like cricket and footfall sport persons work together to achieve single goal. They utilise strength of each other. For instance, in football teammate work together to achieve a goal using different technic.

Secondly, When sport person plays with team he gets opportunity to learn multiple things which helps them to improve their game. They learn from each other mistakes even when you are down in your game inmates keep you motivated. For example,
In cricket when a player is out of form his co teammates supports him. Similarly when they are batting on ground no strike player suggestions are helpful.

However, Some people believe, in games like tennis or swimming, sport person get more opportunity and time to prove themself. For example, In cricket many times a batsman does not get a chance to bat.

In conclusion, game which is played in team has ample of benefit than solo game. Where sport person learn teamwork and improve their game.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04273504274 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32390631912 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606837606838 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6477041195 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6666666667 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222685547752 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744184839743 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897912311242 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111350324593 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774066632334 0.056905535591 136% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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