Although it was a difficult decision to make, you have decided to submit your resignation to your manager.
Write a letter to your manager
Explain why you have decided to leave the company
Describe why the decision was difficult to make
Suggest a current staff member replace your position.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to deliver the tough decision that I will resign my favorite job this month.
I feel really sorry that I am going to study abroad in Canada this August. I chose the computer programming field to pursue my next education and plan to apply for a developer job in a Financial Technology company. Hopefully, I also intend to seek an immigration opportunity in Canada.
This is really a difficult choice because I extremely appreciate all opportunities given, such as moving to learn in Money market desk for 1 year and the Product course in Hong Kong next month. And another thing is the warm kindness of colleagues in Mitsubishi UFJ for me in 2 years.
Due to my short notice, I would like to suggest Mrs. Dung Anh be a proper replacement because we already decided to swap our positions this financial year. I will take this change to hand over all of my current tasks and knowledge in Foreign exchange desk.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Kind regards,
Khang Do.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... to study abroad in Canada this August. I chose the computer programming field to...
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Line 7, column 70, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'opportunities'' or 'opportunity's'?
Suggestion: opportunities'; opportunity's
...oice because I extremely appreciate all opportunities given, such as moving to learn in Money...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so, another thing, i feel, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6902173913 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62899147432 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684782608696 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4192590308 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4545454545 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0603604642849 0.216113520407 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0196265946369 0.0766984524023 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0248314304637 0.0603063233224 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0388221113521 0.12726935374 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266960034218 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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