It is often found that the first time criminals commit further crime after completing their sentencing. In order to circumvent this problem, it is imperative that its main reasons be analyzed first. This essay will first outline the prime factors behind this, namely, improper punishment, and poor management of prisons, followed by analyzing certain ways to fix this problem.
Firstly, the main reason behind repeat offenders is the inadequate penalty being imposed. For instance, in case of an attempt to murder, the maximum prison sentence in India is only for two years. This does not suffice to deter criminals, and its often seen that they lose any fear of law. Secondly, many first time criminals take to crime due to circumstances, like lack of education or poverty. With most of the jails around the world not having facilities to provide them any formal education or training, once out, they take to crime again.
There are two effective solutions to the problem of repeat offenders. One way to tackle this is to pass stricter legislation, such that a criminal thinks twice before committing a crime again. It is suggested that for repeat offenders, the prison term should increase by tenfold each time. Another method of resolving this problem would be to provide some industrial skill development training inside the prisons. This would help them in finding a suitable job once they are out, and very likely to keep them away from the world of crime.
In conclusion, lenient sentencing and lack of proper education, are the main reasons for turning first-time criminals in to repeat offenders. With stricter laws and the development of practical skills in prisoners, these people can surely be turned in to normal souls.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09090909091 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59727848777 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604895104895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.180569555 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.0666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294299833692 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908738983992 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687083827021 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172759793406 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0992764454195 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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