The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work,education or shopping.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Traffic congestion is one of the serious issues that most of the countries around the world are facing these days. Although, reducing the travel need from home to work or other important places is an important factor but it is not the only solution for traffic control, there are many other solutions also. In this essay, I will discuss why I completely disagree with the belief that reduced travel need is the only way to reduce traffic problem.
Although there is a big chunk of population who travel on a daily basis for various activities and play a vital role in contributing to traffic inconsistencies. Due to recent environment friendly initiatives many companies have started to offer work from home options and there is a common trend of home schooling too. However, these steps alone do not have significant impact on traffic congestion control per my understanding. Other possible ways such as better public transport system, population control and enhanced infrastructure also contribute a bigger role towards reducing the traffic related problems. Moreover, online shopping is on its peak and has already proven better advantages. we can shop almost everything starting from needle to airplane through internet, thus reducing the need for travel and hence lowering considerable percentage of traffic.
Last but not the least in my opinion one of the major factor of clutter on roads is due to the unorganized or unskilled driving too. Person should only be allowed to drive if he/she is skilled enough to follow all the rules laid down by traffic regulation. This will not only help to cut down the burden on roads but also control the casualties caused due to accidents.
In conclusion, there are many other effective ways to lower the traffic problem. Cutting down the travel need is not the only solution for this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06557377049 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72443825897 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570491803279 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9552956632 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.357142857 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309908632181 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101276556419 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872025313677 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191131521122 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102249576066 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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