Some people argue that it is important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
People can have difficulty once it is time for them to choose a career for the future since some people may lead their whole life with the same job.There is a dilemma among people whether job satisfaction is more important when deciding on a career or salary.While some people consider included myself doing the job that they enjoy is more crucial, others hold the view that salary can offer people a better lifestyle.
To begin with, feeling enjoyed what you are doing is vital as this enjoyment can prevent most not to be affected by some negative feelings. What i mean by this is that once people feel the satisfaction of their work, it can help them to forget about all their exhaustion and tiredness.By this they can avoid stress and burnout that can be caused by constant concerns about hardships of their job.
On the other hand, to lead a better lifestyle, people have to be able to provide themselves and their family with their daily necessities. In this case, everything can be depended on the job with handsome salary. Some people desire to lead their life with not only satisfying their basic needs but also with luxuries.As a result, they opt for a job with high salary though their choice can be against their will in some cases.
To sum up, before deciding on a future occupation, one has to consider their both finance and physical state as well since good health can not be obtained with a good salary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, while, as to, i mean, as a result, in some cases, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68253968254 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40612356022 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543650793651 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.548076185 49.4020404114 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.571428571 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0 20.7667163134 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.5714285714 7.06120827912 249% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190236831101 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963313182666 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071027420035 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124522025101 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782936876203 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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