In modern days, a rise in illegal acts is increasing day by day. Moreover, a certain part of these crimes is accounted for by young adults. Maybe, this problem comes from performance on television and social media. In this essay, I will examine the reasons for this issue and represent solutions.
The first reason why adults are relating to crime is that nowadays, developing entertainments play for an important role for human behavior because performances on the internet and television portray serious crimes such as rape, robbery, and kill. The primary reason for believing this is that during a period of growing up, most children want to become like the agent 007 which is killer and the name of a serial movie. Also, another reason why juvenile crime is increasing is that modern social media illustrates negative aspects of society. If a child acquired the idea that society is hard to live without any trick, as soon as they become adolescent, he or she will be ready to violate the law.
The first solution for this problem is that performances portrayed in television and internet such as tv shows, movie and animation need to have a limit of age on children. If this solution is successful, it is inevitable that the basic education of children will be fresh far from a crime. The second solution is that vision control of parents is needed for what their children want to watch. This control can prevent toxic information that is possible to reach their children.
In conclusion, as we have seen, this problem is uneasy to discuss. Generally, a flow of much information and developments in entertainments is playing for an important role for the basic education of children. Fortunately, some solutions such as a limit of age on performances and vision control of parents can help them to deal with this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88424437299 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76654797512 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536977491961 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6437978671 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.266666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272700583402 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896014087616 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441107993621 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163320409261 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00776915491146 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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