TPO 28 - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It goes without saying that in this complicated and progressive era in which we live, education and knowledge plays a crucial role in the destiny of the humankind. Some believe that parents today are more involved in their children's education while others stand on the other side, claim that there is no significant difference between today and pas parents. Personally speaking, I believe that nowadays, parents are more aware and care about their children's education. The reasons to illustrate my idea are elaborated upon hereunder.
Firstly, children are no more seen as the labor force, and they have extra time spending on different issues and learning new abilities. In the past time, family members had to work for hours a day all together in order to raise money, cultivate the crops, doing the herd issues, etc. Therefore, there was not enough time to dedicate to other activities rather than hard works on farms and factories. On the other side, by the advent of modern technologies and new lifestyles, the need to work twenty-four-hour to survive is diminished, and there are some extra times to spend on different activities. Hence, parents have more freedom to enroll their children in schools in order to learn many new things regardless of the fear of reducing a labor force.
Second, modern families are less crowded compared with the past, and parents can pay more attention to their children. By the changing of modern human lifestyle, the members of a family reduced increasingly, and the role of the children as a precious asset for parents is increased significantly. Hence, more percentage of family wealth is dedicated to children compared to the past, and the welfare of them goes up. As a result, education as an essential index for well-being plays a crucial role in parents decisions for their children. Consequently, they pay more attention to their children, enrolling them in different classes, activities, and workshops to equip them well with knowledge.
Finally, the speed of the raising of the modern inventions and technologies is unbelievable, and the key to succeeding in adaptation to this circumstance is being a well-educated person. The genesis of the internet and advanced technologies make the lives more complicated. Modern humankind needs to be familiar with new science, inventions, technologies, etc. to live better. Thus, parents reduce their anxieties about the future by keeping themselves involved in their children education in order to make a better future for them with less risk of being a loser facing new technologies.
In sum, I believe that modern parents care more about their children education since there is less need for the labor force, extra time avails, and adaptation to modern lifestyle is inevitable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...sues and learning new abilities. In the past time, family members had to work for hours a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2334.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18666666667 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88533456562 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486666666667 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 732.6 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2829585151 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.7 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247381272533 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794551181704 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620377962752 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149460651913 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479920749594 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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