A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Animals are being used from ancient times to fulfill the needs of humans. A significant number of individuals have a notion that animals must not be harassed by humans and they should have equal privilege as humans do. Others, however, consider humans have complete authority on animals and they should be utilized if needed in the sake of human care. In this essay both the views will discussed followed by an opinion.
Various needs are covered by animals in human society and therefore, their absence increase the difficulties in the community, hence, some individuals believe that they must be used till we find any alternative. The use of animals have enormous benefits for humans. For instance, use of animals as a Guinee pig for conducting experiments in terms of making effective medicine for us. Countless life-saving drugs are being manufactured to save human being with the help of experimental animals, these experiments are impossible without such fauna.
On the other hand, extensive use of creatures for the betterment of humans raises the question for their rights, thus many individuals think that these animals should not be utilized as it hurts their sentiments and endanger the species. Animals deserve the equal laws as humans does, as they are also living creatures and feel pain and emotions. Conducting medicinal test on them exploits their body to harmful chemicals which can have adverse effects on them as well and sometimes leads to death of an animal.
In summary, although animal exploitation increases the risk level of extinction of species but still to save human life, we must use these creatures. Thus, I am of the opinion, that human will be given the top priority till scientists finds an alternative over animals use.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in summary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11418685121 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67356070974 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570934256055 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4465310991 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.692307692 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380609866889 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148003523719 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796668714128 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240811395101 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512985313447 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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