In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
In huge number of nations schools face sever peoblems with desciple behaviour. it happen by paramount of reasons but there are plethoramount of solution to get rid from this obstacle.
To embark on, why worlds most countries have serious problems with student behaviour. First of all, crucial eduaction system and enhancing stress of subject may be reason for this. Owing to large amount of assignment work leads rude behaviour among children. secondly, less pressing for their performance is also one effective reason. Not only lesser pressing but also constantly punishment result in harsh behaviour. Morover, parents lack of affection and love and also enlighters less support in their study performance encourage them to be stubborn and rude.
However, every problem has solution. Firstly, schooling system and educational developement is needed for student therefor, they can be stress free and healthy from mind. Morever, motivation and pressing enhace their best conducts and it reaults in good behaviour among them. secondly, parents enough love and care help them to defeat with their mental problems. Mentors and teacher can show them real way to study and to achieve their goal.finally, pupil who misbehave that bappen only because of their critical situations.
In conclusion, students are back bone for every nation therefor, they should tought importance of good behaviour. In my opinion problems can be easily solved by few soft steps and country can get rid from pupil's rude behaviour.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40254237288 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64078933535 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648305084746 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4203148497 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7333333333 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183114939202 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635862468327 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591145724684 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12228886011 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289555272404 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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