You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• give details of your study plans
• explain why you want to get a part-time job
• suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Sid,
Hope this letter finds you well.
Recently our country has gone through the process of general election which happens after every five years for selection of federal government. Precendently, people of our country have voted in favour of the opposition party, resulting into the change of terms for the ruling political party. However, this time they have voted in favour of the ruling party and appointed them to the government second time consistently.
this phenomenon has surprised everyone and people around the globe are equally interested to find out the reasons what made this happen, so as are the citizens of the country. Some are of the believe that the quantum of infrastructural development carried out by the government was tremendous, while others believe it were the crucial steps taken to eradicate unemployment was the factor for the consecutive victory.
This is being treated as a victory of the common man like me, who has waited for employment for many years now and having got opportunities to work have changed our lives dramatically.
I look forward towards your visit to my country during the upcoming summer vacations. Do keep me posted of your plans of travel.
Yours truly,
Deepak
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...government second time consistently. this phenomenon has surprised everyone and p...
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Line 11, column 189, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...he citizens of the country. Some are of the believe that the quantum of infrastructural dev...
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Line 11, column 193, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...itizens of the country. Some are of the believe that the quantum of infrastructural dev...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, second, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1054.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24378109453 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72869131511 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676616915423 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.2429178427 44.8134815571 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.4 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177997140862 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738486569165 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511289378265 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996139822002 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061016655534 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 8.37731958763 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.