The given bar chart compares and contrasts the data on the differences in the number of minutes per person who did household chores per day by the sex of Great Britain.
Overall, it is clearly seen from the chart that men spent their most time on gardening/pet care, while cooking/baking/washing up was the most popular household chores for women.
Clearly, the amount of time each day of men was higher than that of women who took part in some activities including gardening/pet care/maintenance odd jobs. To specify, males used 49.5 minutes for gardening/petcare each day, whereas the figure for females was 21 minutes. Besides, 26 minutes were the average amount of time that men spent on maintenance odd jobs per day was approximately triple as high as the figure for women.
Nevertheless, women surpassed men by the number of minutes per day when it comes to other categories. In detail, it took 74 minutes for women to cook/bake/wash up per day, whereas just only 30 minutes for men. Moreover, the amount of time which women used for clothes/washing/ironing/sewing/tidying/cleaning house was more than many times men did, respectively over 13 and 4 times.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.078125 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.32696534805 2.65546596893 163% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2080361373 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.875 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0848635212194 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449407716942 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374839664711 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0681503834346 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317849551436 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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