environment
Nowadays, the quality of human life is degrading following the latent destruction to our nature and the issue continues to affect other species. This has made environmental problem to be the most crucial and the number one priority for us to solve.
Talking about environment means every aspects of our life, including water, air, and land. While our body contains water at about 70%, we should deal with the current water supply which has been contaminated by home and industrial wastes. These wastes should have been processed to remove toxic chemicals and heavy metals prior to discharging, but the fact does not tell that way. As a result, more and more people are infected by digestive diseases such as diarrhea and typhus due to consuming polluted water.
Another aspect is the air that is becoming much less healthier to breathe. This comes as an effect of vehicle emission that exerts carbon monoxide, being one of the most toxic chemical that can cause death at a certain level. Furthermore, industrial activities involving coal combustion adds green-house gases in the air, allowing the rise of earth temperature. Polar bear is one of the species which experiences the massive impact of this so-called global warming because the Ice where they live has mostly melted.
To sum, The environmental issue is not only harming human but also other living creatures on earth. This is why we should take account on it and put this as our top priority before the condition gets even worse.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: LESS_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'less healthy'?
Suggestion: less healthy
...aspect is the air that is becoming much less healthier to breathe. This comes as an effect of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, while, such as, talking about, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.984 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56079987504 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.429641497 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.833333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0419620107953 0.244688304435 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0174796163565 0.084324248473 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579733289339 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0192362771458 0.151304729494 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033318209365 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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