Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want. Others feel that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are nor suitable for women.
What is your opinion ?
Many believe that men are women are different and possess different abilities. Consequently, there are some jobs that should be done by men alone and some jobs that should be the domain of women. There are, however, many who disagree with previous system of thoughts and believe that men and women are created same; hence, both genders should be able do any job they want. Nevertheless, I believe women should be able to do any job they want, if they meet the required criteria.
First, we see women in almost every field, working toe-to-toe with men, and sometimes even outperform their male counterparts. For example, chancellor of Germany, Angela Merkel, who has done remarkable job at handling many sketchy situations at national and international level. Many more examples like this can be given. Therefore, it is quite right to imply that women can do any job they want, should they choose to do it.
However, we must accept the scientific fact that biologically men and women are different. Implication of this is that jobs where brute force or strength is more important are not well suited for women. For instance, working on an offshore oilrig. In this case, workers not only have to live far away on site in the ocean, but also possess certain physical fitness and strength to perform various tasks.
In my opinion, when it comes to general population, both genders are equal intellectually and physically. However, at the advanced level such as elite athletes biological differences can be very clearly seen. At this level, women will lack behind their male counterpart.
Finally, the issue whether men and women are equal is complex. Experts are debating over this for long time. Should the women choose to work in any field they want? The answer is resounding yes. If they have all required skillset, then there should not be any discrimination based on gender.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98101265823 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60122732424 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566455696203 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7358779946 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.493509965741 0.244688304435 202% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148742177791 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124616298952 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26668929972 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136017765566 0.056905535591 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.