In today ' s world both men and women have gained equality and participate in jobs equally . Some people opine that men and women are equal so women can take any vacancy available while others have a thought that they do not possess equality so there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women . I accord with the former view and I will elaborate my glimpse in upcoming paragraph .
Embarking upon there are some reasons to support my notion . First and the foremost , in historic time there was a belief that women only have skills to do work as a housewife rather than doing professional job like engineering but this is not true in today's world as they have good leadership as well as communication skills. As an evidence , a plethora of female population in the world are placed as chief executive officer of various firms and they are managing the company as a leader . So women are recruited at the same level as men in various firms.
Secondly , due to advancement in technology and development of various exercising machines women possess same physical strength as well as stamina , this gives them the same opportunity to work in armed forces as men and in today ' s world there umpteen women who are serving the nation . for instance a recent survey has shown that out of 100 soldiers 50 are women an the rest half are men.
To conclude , in modern time men and women are having the same leadership skills as well as physical strength so women deserve same type of jobs as men .
- Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they released from Prison What do you think are the causes of this What possible solutions can you suggest 78
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 67
- More and more business and individuals are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather than being face to face. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating 73
- Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want. Others feel that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women.What is your opinion? 56
- Some people think that poverty is the reason behind most crimes Do you agree or disagree 81
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61742424242 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4948881786 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.9766631756 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.9 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.468707317003 0.244688304435 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1911269623 0.084324248473 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.17417833603 0.0667982634062 261% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305333530653 0.151304729494 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147940419271 0.056905535591 260% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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