Given pie charts illustrates the income and expense of an American children charity in one year.
Overall, it can be seen that donated foods contribute the major revenue, while the programme services make the lion portion in expenditures. The total income generated durine the period was more than the total expense, hence have a surplus budget in this year.
Firstly, 53561580$ was the total income from various sources; in which donated foods accounted 86.6%. Community contributions stood second place with 10.4% and programme revenue with 2.2%. The other sectors Government grants, investment income and others, made negligible proportion's with less than 1 percentage by each sectors.
On the other hand, 53224826$was the total expence for the particular year.It was less than the total income.Programme services took almost 96% of the expenditure and stood first. coming next, fundo rising programme's spend 2.6 percentage while, management and other programmes took 1.6 percentage of the income.
- the chart shows the proportion of people in the UK survey carried out in three different years who said they were interested in certain sports 87
- Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village. 73
- Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. But, others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are best at or that they find the most interest. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 78
- Some people think that it is more important to spend public money on promoting healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 89
- Do you support that the nuclear technology should be used for constructive purposes?Use your own knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.Give reasons for your viewpoint. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ated foods contribute the major revenue, while the programme services make the li...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$53561580'.
Suggestion: $53561580
...lion portion in expenditures. Firstly, 53561580$ was the total income from various sourc...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Coming
...96% of the expenditure and stood first. coming next, fundo rising programmes spend 2.6...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 24.0651302605 8% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 41.998997996 29% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 676.0 1615.20841683 42% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 119.0 315.596192385 38% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68067226891 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.30283395202 4.20363070211 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7251259973 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 176.041082164 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.731092436975 0.561755894193 130% => OK
syllable_count: 195.3 506.74238477 39% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.4017127625 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.5714285714 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0328165702507 0.244688304435 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0142986853248 0.084324248473 17% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0244460730725 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0177928107858 0.151304729494 12% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.017913672476 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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