The bar shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days.

Essay topics:

The bar shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days.

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of people visiting a cinema from Monday to Sunday. Overall, most people would like to go to the cinema at the weekend in 3 different years rather than on Monday.
Turning to the details, the percentage of people going to the cinema experienced an upward trend from Monday to Sunday over 3 periods. However, there were decreases from the figure for Tuesday to the one for Wednesday and Thursday, then the percentage rose up again.
The percentage for Saturday was at peak in all 3 years 2003, 2005 and 2007, about 40 percent, 45 percent, 43 percent respectively. The day least attracting people to watch a movie in the cinema was Monday in 2003 with approximately 10 percent. Meanwhile, they were Thursday and Wednesday in 2005 and 2007 respectively.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 658.0 965.302439024 68% => OK
No of words: 135.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87407407407 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.4086580994 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78585492342 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614814814815 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 193.5 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.899174869 43.030603864 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.0 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231488032969 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106805592347 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718553573564 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162808280738 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753979826831 0.0819641961636 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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