Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Submitted by pd on Fri, 06/14/2019 - 11:52

Most of the certain job is allotted to a particular gender since the establishment of our civilization. Based on them, people have different opinions over gender-based jobs. Some agree to few extents that the jobs should be gender-based depends upon the qualities of men and women general behavior and habits. Moreover, these habits of both genders make them quite suitable for certain jobs.
Women have certain habits, that makes them different in job-related qualities comparatively than men. For example, basically, women have caring nature more in them in comparison to men so that why women generally are the first choice for “Nurse” in Hospitals. The second example is their presence make the office environment more pleasant that why most of the office have women on receptions. So that when someone enters in office he/she become slight polite to talk to that lady and reduce their tension and pressure of job to some level and then move further to their respective work. Mostly office jobs like data entry and personal secretory are an offer to women because of their ability of long sitting nature.
On the other hand, men also have certain qualities that make them suitable for certain jobs like women. Like, men have the quality of being protective in nature so, for security jobs we see men more suitable. The second quality of men to make them suitable for a certain job as we know that a man of courage is respected everywhere. Based on this nature of men want a good body and build nature of bodybuilding so we generally see men as bouncers outside clubs and hotels. This same quality of men makes them suitable for Army, Navy, Air and Police force jobs.
In conclusion, in our modern world, we see men and women in all type of jobs around us. Both men and women are having more than enough qualities which barely depend on their respective genders. But to some extent, I agree that certain jobs are suitable for men and certain jobs are suitable for women.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...ons over gender-based jobs. Some agree to few extents that the jobs should be gen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, then, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83284457478 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54381543777 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478005865103 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5731863433 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9411764706 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0588235294 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.468814418205 0.244688304435 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185436715969 0.084324248473 220% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150115489778 0.0667982634062 225% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.339445902575 0.151304729494 224% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105029174967 0.056905535591 185% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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