A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• give contact details for when you are away
• give instructions about how to care for your pet
• describe other household duties
Dear john,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and to the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to thankyou for agreeing to homesitting for me when I am going for official tour to New york for one week.
My training period is 23rd june to 30th june and my flight is on 22nd june so It would be great if you come to my house one day before. Through those days, you can contact me on my local phone number or send me a message on watsapp or facebook account. I will surely reach you back if I will be busy.
As you are a regular visitor, my cat(nancy) is quite familiar with you. I am mentioning you few responsibilities which I am sure you will handle very nicely. First of all, give cat food to nancy thrice a day, I have kept that in kitchen cabinet. In the evening give her a bowl of milk. I am sure she will play with her toys and will not disturb you much. FUrther, please water my plants once a day because they are hard to regrow once they get wither. Keep the outside light on every night for the safety reason.
As usual,feel my home as your own house and feel free to use anything as yours.i have stored all necessary ration items but still if anything is missed you can buy from nearby convenience store.
Once again thankyou so much for helping me .I hope you will enjoy staying at my home even in my absence.
Warm Regards
Harry
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-09-10 | Prabhjot Kaur Bhullar | 84 | view |
| 2019-08-24 | bhatvishal@ | 73 | view |
| 2019-06-15 | harmankaur | 73 | view |
| 2019-06-15 | harmankaur | 73 | view |
| 2019-06-15 | harmankaur | 70 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear john, I hope this letter finds you in radiant...
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Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e so It would be great if you come to my house one day before. Through those days...
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Line 8, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , feel
...y night for the safety reason. As usual,feel my home as your own house and feel free...
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Line 8, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... can buy from nearby convenience store. Once again thankyou so much for helping ...
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Line 10, column 43, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ce again thankyou so much for helping me .I hope you will enjoy staying at my home...
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Line 10, column 45, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... again thankyou so much for helping me .I hope you will enjoy staying at my home ...
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Line 10, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... staying at my home even in my absence. Warm Regards Harry
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, still, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1109.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 264.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.20075757576 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19832442557 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621212121212 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3206805238 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9333333333 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 4.34317383033 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187982419718 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581596222418 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386724874478 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101372644563 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453367081759 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.