some cities do not restrict how styles and unique can be houses and offices that people construct.Do you think the advantages of this approach outweigh the disadvantages?
It is no doubt today fashion plays a vital role in human being life through styles have very basic need in their life.There root can that it is very common thing in anyone nations.There are plenty manifold reasons behind for this.This essay would throw some light an all aspects and things in the right way.
The seeds to the issue and multiheads.There most predominant some older consider that stylish can not essential in whole life.Therefore, some communities could not allow fashion and unique as well as home and work places.After that,There are think that fashion has time killing and youth do not focus in their offices.Moreover, some adolescent ponder that styles is very indispensable role in our life.For instances,kids look awesome that why there easily contract in any work.
Nevertheless,there are no denying,in my point of view, a couple of week youth always follow new trend instead of there feel superb as far as teenager has wearing new clothes and shocks.Moreover,in few days dozens has considering that first impress is not least impress.For examples, there are wearing new trend all in all self conflict upsurge day by day but also behaviour, development and extra.last but not the least, in my mind,it is very good impact of society.Thus,utilise are delight than there are good perspective in all work.
All said and done,I reckon on one hand dozen can do fashion in their day more than there definitity development personal attitude and work place.on other hand,I think that it is good influences in our life.Then,off spring has doing make up than there are feel fresh at any time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, i reckon, i think, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07894736842 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12334528524 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616541353383 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 66.0 20.2975951904 325% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.518431614 49.4020404114 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 337.75 106.682146367 317% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 66.5 20.7667163134 320% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 37.75 7.06120827912 535% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122195029126 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785352914768 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491405996789 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785352914768 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491405996789 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.7 13.0946893788 273% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 4.49 50.2224549098 9% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.0 11.3001002004 257% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.77 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.4 10.1190380762 281% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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