Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion on this? Do you think this is a good or bad change?
In the contemporary era, the progression of large shopping malls has increased and small shops are vanishing and its related effects has sparked a heated debate. While proponents assert that large shopping malls are containing all the household items at one place as compared to small shops and having many other benefits, the opponents disagree with this disposition. This essay will scrutinize the replacement of small shops into large shopping malls have many benefits.
There are myriad of arguments in favour of my stance in which the most preponderant one is that large shopping malls contain all the items in one place, whereas the small shops contain few items.Forexample, A recent study showed that people want to go to shopping malls as compared to other small shops because they believed that it takes less time in shopping as compared to going to various place for various items. Consequently, in this fast moving world people prefer to go to large shopping malls.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that large shopping malls give offers on various items and they post all the offers and products on theri website, so that people can easily plan their shopping list instead of searching the items from shop to shop. For instance, before large shopping mall in my country i had to search certain items in variou shops but now in my area there is a large shopping mall which has reduced considerable amount of my time for shopping. Apparently, large shopping malls save your money by providing various offers on different items.
To conclude, this essay discussed that large shopping malls provide various facilities as compared to small shopping malls. Therefore, I am consummately in accord with this statement that replacing of small shops with large malls is a good change.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...onents assert that large shopping malls are containing all the household items at one place as...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Forexample
...ereas the small shops contain few items.Forexample, A recent study showed that people want...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...efore large shopping mall in my country i had to search certain items in variou s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, consequently, if, so, therefore, whereas, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06040268456 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59832108586 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496644295302 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.4636719185 50.4703680194 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.8 104.977214359 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8 20.9669160288 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343456628674 0.242375264174 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198554350212 0.0925447433944 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619935113864 0.071462118173 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267425744316 0.151781067708 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067341072708 0.0609392437508 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 12.6369458128 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 53.1260098522 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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