Some people believe that nowadays have too many choices.
To what extent do yoi agree or disagree with this statement?
In this modern era, people have much more choices in all aspects of their life compared with the past generations. Therefore, the availability of abundant number of options add both advantages and disadvantages on individual’s life. In this essay, I shall discuss on the options available for people of the society together with the possible solutions while mitigating it’s negative impacts on the society.
First and foremost, there are myriad of options available on different aspects such as clothing, accomodation, food, studies, employment and equipment as well. For instance, if we consider ondecission of food purchases; it would depend on taste, price and packaging. If we consider on clothing we have variety of options on colours, designs, material and price as well. In addition, people can either dwell in city limits or countryside depending on their prefrence and convinience. Students have the freedom to learn in a private or public institution according to their preffered subject field. Every country depends on private and public investments, consequently the employment opportunities will vary according to the type of investment.
Therefore, people will face difficulties in finding the optimal solution which is more suitable for them using their past experience, education level and the circumstances. More options have also led to increasing stress level of the society due to complex needs and wants. At the same time, if we consider on benefits, increase of options will reduce human involvement in most of the operations. Decrease of human involvement can increase the effectiveness and efficiency of these processes.
In conclusion, it is recommended to impose rigid regulations governing on all the industries prevailing in the market to save consumers from being cheated by the merchants. It is also believed, that general pubic to prioritize their needs and wants to get the maximum value on their funds. Some of the governments has also imposed sanctions on some goods and services to control the net outflow of their country. Finally, variety of options improves confidentiality, availability, intergrtity and encapsulation of the society in the long run.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...h is more suitable for them using their past experience, education level and the circumstances....
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Line 7, column 208, Rule ID: PUBIC_X[1]
Message: Did you mean 'public'?
Suggestion: public
...ants. It is also believed, that general pubic to prioritize their needs and wants to ...
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Line 7, column 291, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...o get the maximum value on their funds. Some of the governments has also imposed sanctions ...
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Line 7, column 526, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rgrtity and encapsulation of the society in the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50588235294 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16526345405 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576470588235 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.1073111504 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.117647059 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0861992298433 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0268983827406 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375427946453 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.053475981717 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383853649411 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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