there is no dispute that expanding use of automobiles is being viewed as the the principal factor for rising the global temperature and many health and fitness issues. It is clear that the best way to avoid this problem is to dissuade people from using their vehicles. This essay will discuss solution that can be offered by the government.
Many studies and reports show that increasing the cost of purchasing cars participate in the decline of using vehicles. Government can impose heavy taxes on prices of cars, increasing the cost of consuming fuels and assess tariffs on congested roads. Although this approach can help in compressing the use of vehicles, there are some opines that it is less effective approach because most likely the rich citizens will be able to afford the high cost of using automobiles whilst the poor ones will not.
In another way, there an evident approach that can contribute to decreasing use of vehicles is to use alternatives transportation such as buses or trains. Many cities like Paris and London that have comfortable public transportation have recorded lower cars use rates and the roads are less congested. Government should invest in infrastructure of public transportation networks. Accordingly people are more likely willing to use public transportation if it is more convenient.
In conclusion, this essay acknowledge that increasing use of vehicles participate in many health problems and main reason for climate change. However there are many approaches that contribute to deterring car owners from using their cars. It is recommended that government should take steps to tackle this problem.
- There is a good deal of evidence that increasing car use is contributing to global warming and having other undesirable effects on people s health and well being What can be done to discourage people from using their cars Give reasons for your answer and 63
- A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons 56
- in the future the main reason for going to the shopping mall will be for entertainment not to shop DO you agree or disagree 63
- There is a good deal of evidence that increasing car use is contributing to global warming and having other undesirable effects on people’s health and well-being.What can be done to discourage people from using their cars?Give reasons for your answer an 78
- There is a good deal of evidence that increasing car use is contributing to global warming and having other undesirable effects on people s health and well being What can be done to discourage people from using their cars Give reasons for your answer and 61
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...ould take steps to tackle this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, however, if, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 937.175257732 148% => OK
No of words: 263.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26996197719 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89733341317 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54752851711 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 290.88556701 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.4487577855 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.615384615 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298451650777 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105866958295 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620957909146 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18193586133 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223672044418 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 8.37731958763 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 8.71597938144 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 41.2886597938 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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