it is generally acknowledged that families now are not as close as they used to be. What are some possible reasons for this and what can be done to reverse the trend?
members in a family are concerned that they used to be dear to other's heart than they are now. there is a host of possible reasons with regard to these kinds of feelings. In this essay, I will name some of the causes and suggest valuable solutions.
For one, people today are so busy doing their daily job that they have no time for family members. Parents pursuing higher career use their money to hire a person to look after their children, do the housework,... Students spend most of their time at school and extra classes studying and doing research, they go home in late nights and leave early in the mornings. Despite living in the same house, they rarely talk to each other. The large amount of work decreases the relationship.
The solution would be to make a timetable for each member, and make sure that there is a same time duration that all of the family are free, maybe in the weekend or some nights. The length can be short, but the memories are unforgettable. For instance, mom and dad can leave work a bit earlier to take up their son from school and prepare them a delicious dinner. The dining room will be a suitable place for each to share stories and have a meaningful conversation. Furthermore, the rental of a house keeper is usually not very fundamental because the household chores can be done by any member in a family.
In conclusion, there are some reasons why family now are not as close as they used to be, and solutions should be produced early to promote relationship between family members.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Members
members in a family are concerned that they use...
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Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...dear to others heart than they are now. there is a host of possible reasons with rega...
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Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...of feelings. In this essay, I will name some of the causes and suggest valuable solutions. ...
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Line 2, column 209, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...k after their children, do the housework,... Students spend most of their time at ...
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Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...that there is a same time duration that all of the family are free, maybe in the weekend o...
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Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e, maybe in the weekend or some nights. The length can be short, but the memories a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, look, may, so, for instance, in conclusion, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56934306569 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47902383343 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594890510949 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8957826015 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4285714286 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33949597067 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104833849854 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895630341202 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223486642498 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944842681805 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.