You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
introduce yourself
describe your plans for the party
invite your neighbour to come
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Jamie,
I am writing this letter to tell you that next weekend we will be holding a house-warming party at our home. Just letting you know, we will be expecting a good number of people and the party can get a bit noisy.
It has been only a few days since we moved in and did not get a chance to talk face to face. I will like to give a short introduction of myself. I am Malik and I am an accountant at Ernest and young. You guys are aware that we recently moved into our first home however now we plan to invite our friends and family for a get-together. We plan to keep this event as low as possible especially music we will try to keep the volume limited to the house boundaries.
We both like to invite you to our party. This will give us a chance to introduce ourselves. We will be looking forward and love to see you guys next Saturday night.
Yours Faithfully,
Malik
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: WILL_LIKE_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'would'?
Suggestion: would
...ot get a chance to talk face to face. I will like to give a short introduction of my...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, look, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 723.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.20348837209 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39147208297 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593023255814 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5723555446 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.7272727273 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133602554109 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582996988839 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651378667939 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741886012301 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00992900415008 0.0580467560999 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.