Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life?
In today’s society, it is quite popular that parent decides to have kid later. Resulting from several factors, this trend could impact on society and community life.
There are some reasons leading that people choose to give birth later. Firstly, they need time to build and pursuit their career. To clarify, normally, devoting time to take care of their kid may make the parent hard to balance between workings and family. As a result, the efficiency of their works could be disrupted and decreased. In addition, giving birth later will bring many opportunities to people, especially the youth, to enjoy their life. For example, they might travel to wherever or do whatever they want without giving a parental care to their offspring.
On the other hand, this trend may lead to both negative and positive impacts. First of all, having children later would go hand in hand with increasing the gap between two generations. It is undeniable that the older parents often difficultly understand their children current enjoying things, such as, movie or music. Therefore, it is hard for those parents to bring up their kids well. Moreover, getting pregnant after the age 35 would bring many risks for their kid and themselves as well. To specify, it is easier to the children to have negative symptoms, for example, dawn or slow-developed brain, when their mother is over 35 years old.
In conclusion, it is true that more and more parents choose to give birth later in their life by several reasons. Some negative and positive effects would be caused based on those trend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... would be caused based on those trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98863636364 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48812318864 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587121212121 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1849640777 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.3125 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.125 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238878731213 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750858593208 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656694697392 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157551928515 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503394894036 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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