You have just move into a new home and are planning to hold a party . you are worried that the noise may isturb your neighbour
Write a letter to your neighbour . in your letter
. introduce yourself
. describe your plans for the party
. invite your neighbour to come
Dear Mr and Mrs Hoa ,
My name is Anh , you can call me Ty . I am your new neighbour an employee of this nearby supermarket . My family has just move to new accommodation and it is opposite your home .Nice to meet you.
This weekend ,on Saturday 8th July ,2019 at 6:30 p.m , I am planning to hold an outside party in my garden . It helps me to meet my friends and relatives or others such as new neighbours, college , boss ,etc. In this party I have some homemade food and some snacks, fast food ,candy and sugary drinks . The kids will love it and we will have the opportunity to meet each other . We can dance and sing together . I am very excited about life here and you could help me get to know them .
I could like to invite you and your family to my party . We would be very happy if you could come to my home .
Yours sincerely,
Anh
Anh Pham .
- You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect.write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter.correct the information in the article . explain why it is i 73
- You have recently moved to a different houseWrite a letter to an english-speaking friend. In your letter, you should. explain why you have moved.describe the new house. invite your friend to come and visitWrite at least 15o words 73
- You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying , so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend .In your letter. Give details of your study plans.Explain why 56
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- In the countries , many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past . Do you think this is a positive or nagative development? 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Dear Mr and Mrs Hoa , My name is Anh , you can call me Ty . ...
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Line 2, column 15, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Dear Mr and Mrs Hoa , My name is Anh , you can call me Ty . I am your new neig...
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Line 2, column 36, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...a , My name is Anh , you can call me Ty . I am your new neighbour an employee of ...
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Line 2, column 101, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...r an employee of this nearby supermarket . My family has just move to new accommod...
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Line 2, column 177, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...commodation and it is opposite your home .Nice to meet you. This weekend ,on Sat...
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Line 2, column 179, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Nice
...mmodation and it is opposite your home .Nice to meet you. This weekend ,on Saturda...
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Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
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...r home .Nice to meet you. This weekend ,on Saturday 8th July ,2019 at 6:30 p.m ,...
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Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'July 2019'.
Suggestion: July 2019
...et you. This weekend ,on Saturday 8th July ,2019 at 6:30 p.m , I am planning to hold an ...
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Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ou. This weekend ,on Saturday 8th July ,2019 at 6:30 p.m , I am planning to hold...
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Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
... ,on Saturday 8th July ,2019 at 6:30 p.m , I am planning to hold an outside party ...
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Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ng to hold an outside party in my garden . It helps me to meet my friends and rela...
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Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...r others such as new neighbours, college , boss ,etc. In this party I have some ho...
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...s such as new neighbours, college , boss ,etc. In this party I have some homemade ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... In this party I have some homemade food and some snacks, fast food ,candy and su...
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Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...omemade food and some snacks, fast food ,candy and sugary drinks . The kids will ...
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Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...acks, fast food ,candy and sugary drinks . The kids will love it and we will have ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...love it and we will have the opportunity to meet each other . We can dance and si...
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Line 3, column 379, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...have the opportunity to meet each other . We can dance and sing together . I am v...
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Line 3, column 412, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...h other . We can dance and sing together . I am very excited about life here and y...
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Line 3, column 487, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...e and you could help me get to know them . I could like to invite you and your fa...
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Line 4, column 55, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...o invite you and your family to my party . We would be very happy if you could com...
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Line 4, column 108, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... very happy if you could come to my home . Yours sincerely, Anh Anh Pham .
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Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ould come to my home . Yours sincerely, Anh Anh Pham .
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Anh
...d come to my home . Yours sincerely, Anh Anh Pham .
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...home . Yours sincerely, Anh Anh Pham .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 681.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.12727272727 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20291733676 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.7305475893 44.8134815571 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.75 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.75 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 4.34317383033 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 2.54639175258 982% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261269470326 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100307289519 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0990094382826 0.0603063233224 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145319619129 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117734740385 0.0580467560999 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.9 8.37731958763 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.08 8.71597938144 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.62 7.59969072165 74% => OK
difficult_words: 14.0 41.2886597938 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.