You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news.
Write to your friend. In the letter:
• Describe the house.
• Describe the neighbourhood.
• Invite your friend to come and see the house.
Dear Sam,
I am just writing this letter to tell you that we have moved to our new house in Chandigarh.
I am also much delighted while sharing a good news with you that I was blessed with a baby girl last week. Therefor, we decided to shift in an 4 BHK apartment according to family need which is in sector 32, Shivalik Vihar. Our new home is on 1st floor with all the necessary amenities like water, 24 hour electricity, Gym and Spa, Central Air Conditioned etc.
Let me tell you more about this society, It is the newest building in town and is very close to my office.Moreover, neighbours are very well-known to me and are close to my family also, this is a additional benefit for me.
Plan for a visit to my new apartment for a family dinner on this weekend. I will wait for your confirmation.
Your's Lovingly.
Charlie
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good news'.
Suggestion: good news
... I am also much delighted while sharing a good news with you that I was blessed with a baby...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 107, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
... in town and is very close to my office.Moreover, neighbours are very well-known to me a...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 195, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...nd are close to my family also, this is a additional benefit for me. Plan for ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 689.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47402597403 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66946306546 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668831168831 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.9703051518 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4285714286 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142247176261 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803814227334 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753219352202 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0779510819347 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416361104856 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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