Some people prefer to live with a roommate. Others prefer to live aline. Compare the advantages of each choice. Which of these two options do you prefer? Use Specific Reasons to Support Your Answer.
While some part of people would favor living with a roommate, I would prefer living alone referring to my campus housing experience in both occasions.
Having a roommate would definitely enable an interesting and sharing life since that with roommates we could always share either the bad vibes, boring weekends, tedious house chores, or the down-to-earth daily goods shopping. On the other hand, such a life also indicates the need in sharing public space, lifestyle, and having less privacy.
Take my experience for example, home exercising three times a week has long been my habitual event after work; however, without enough space in my room I could only perform such a private activity with someone watching for that there is only so much space at home. Despite being a close friend with my roommate, performing postures that may sometimes looked odd or intimate in front of her still discomforts me. Such a lifestyle gap should be neglectable and yet still would add extra worries and mood swings to both of us.
Living alone, on the other hand, seems to warrant the elimination of the problem. Although no longer with one house partner to share the day, with adequate personal space I can do so much more needless to worry about other's perspective.
By and large, living alone would be the better alternative for me. I would have more privacy and freedom without minding the uneasiness while exercising in the public area and would have a more quality life without any other lifestyle differences worries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 211, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'watches'.
Suggestion: watches
...rm such a private activity with someone watching for that there is only so much space at...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, so, still, while, for example, by and large, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 254.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00787401575 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53264384163 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629921259843 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.8727441181 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.2 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 5.45110844103 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13093197666 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586565492085 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688047953881 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898546922895 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840794411059 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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