Dear friends,
I hope you all doing very well!
I am writing this letter to all of you to say sorry that I had returned my hometown without telling anyone. I want to apologize thousands of times to you with deep guilt.
My parens told me that My grandfather had a serious disease so I have to back immediately. Another reasons is I had been feeling anxious and depressed recently, which I could not relax myself with normal thinking.
I had been told my grandfather is getting better so I realize that I am not only own you guys an apologize but also miss all my workmates so much. I recalled the most enjoy time is work in PAL which I spent amazing 3 years there with a wonderful team. All the people in the team support me a lot.
It is hard to use any word to say thank you, I hope all of you could have bright future and see you soon.
Kind regards,
Joe
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear friends, I hope you all doing very well! I am w...
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Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nds, I hope you all doing very well! I am writing this letter to all of you t...
^^^
Line 4, column 171, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ousands of times to you with deep guilt. My parens told me that My grandfather ha...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 108, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...ve to back immediately. Another reasons is I had been feeling anxious and depresse...
^^
Line 8, column 95, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...realize that I am not only own you guys an apologize but also miss all my workmates so much....
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 715.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28143712575 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39989063539 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622754491018 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.945760797 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.375 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25097221926 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924214946627 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891915074976 0.0603063233224 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143495829624 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726114744817 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.