In some countries children have very strict rules of behavior, in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want. To what extent should children have to follow rules?
Nowadays, Parents in every country have their own style of treating children. In a few countries, the children are demanded to follow certain rules, while in other countries they are provided more freedom to do anything. This essay will argue that why children needs to be given choice to choose what they want instead of forcing them to follow strict rules.
There is growing number of parents imposing children to follow specific rules. And, there are many compelling reasons why they do as such. One of the many reasons are, they do not want their children to repeat the mistakes they had done during their childhood times. To illustrate, it is a human tendency that children tend to show interest in extracurricular activities instead of focusing on studies. Thus, children end up with no bright future. Therefore, many parents treat their children to follow some rules so they can have a better future.
In contrast, parents in certain countries offer more freedom to their children to choose what they want. Because, many parents believe that, children can have a bright career if they follow children passion and dream. For instance, if the child has a keen interest in photography, their parents support his passion to become a great photographer instead of forcing their children to study medicine or law. As per the recent statistics by the University of Stanford, in India there are 73% of the children are unhappy with the career they chose since parents didn’t support their idea during their childhood. Therefore, few countries allow them to do what they wish to do.
In conclusion, this essay argued why certain countries asked children to follow the strict rules and while other countries give freedom to the children. In my opinion, the children need to be given the freedom to choose their own way of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00325732899 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5178626354 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488599348534 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2255847191 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.427801150114 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165059433939 0.084324248473 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920415349564 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298210398384 0.151304729494 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343280032598 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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