Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity.
What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity?
What solutions can you suggest?
It is commonly believed by many that, people loosing bio diversity because of the influence of people across the globe. In this essay, we are going to discuss about it effects and the methods to mitigate the problem.
Firstly, several people argue that the existing of animals and other important species have become increasingly less. This potentially leading to increase in deforestation and global warming. Additionally, The loss of bio diversity causing the drastic change in climatic conditions that causing the shortage of food and water. Therefore, the consequences are extremely bad. For example, loss of food and water would make human survival impossible.
Secondly, it cause the deserts to get dried up which in turn leads to process of desertification. In addition, people face the loss of land for the agriculture farming. Hence, there are some effective methods to be taken to overcome the loss of bio diversity. People must be well education about the adverse effect's of bio diversity, deforestation etc. by spreading the news through proper communication channels. For example, leveraging social media to broadcast the news across the world. In addition to this, increase number of zoo parks where the species can live. This could bring the significant impact in saving the bio-diversity and, thus, increase in economy and benefit to country.
In conclusion, human cannot live with the effects of bio-diversity. The world would be dominated by human and less chances of human survival. Educating people, establishing proper parks are one way to protect it.
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first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.328 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90131004893 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.3114315199 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.0 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8888888889 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290793760829 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791559836682 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674043696395 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163263433725 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537773999182 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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