Last year you attended a presentation skill course at the Sydney College of Australia. Your new employer has asked you to provide copies of your reports and assignments as quickly as possible.
Write a letter to the director of the school. In your letter, explain:
• Who you are and why you are writing
• Request these documents
• And ask whether you need to pay any fee for that
Dear Sir or Madam,
I attend a course at your college last year and would like to receive a copy of my reports and assignments that were submitted by me. Although, I have the online copy, my new employer needs the hard-copy along with the stamp and signature of the college authorities.
Let me explain in detail. My name is Mary Smith and I attended the 2018 presentation skill course conducted by the college annually. Since, I acquired my presentation skills from the prestigious Sydney College of Australia, my employer insists that I provide proof of all my projects. Could you please urgently send the documents to the below address?
#07-55 Block 88, Bedok South Avenue 3, Singapore.
Finally, I would like to know if I need to bear the courier charges or pay any fee for acquiring the documents. In addition, please feel free to contact me at +65-98765432 if you need further information.
Yours Faithfully,
Mary Smith
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- In some countries, people prefer to rent a house for accommodation, while in other countries people prefer to buy their own house. Does renting a house have more advantages or disadvantages than buying a house? 73
- Some people believe that the libraries are a waste of resources and money so computers should replace them However others do not agree Discuss both sides and give your opinion 78
- Write a letter to a friend to ask for his/her help to collect money for a charity organization. The letter needs to cover the following details:-Why do you want to collect money for the charity organization-Ask for your friend to help-Explain in detail ho 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92452830189 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80336696533 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672955974843 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3744421453 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280225112108 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912108602276 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834558676199 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123877195578 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107398699063 0.0580467560999 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.