The main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers

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The main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers

The bar charts give information about the main reasons for study according the different age of students and the amount of support they received from employers. The study reasons divided in reasons specifically whether for their future career or even for interest whilst the age range separated in five categories. Overall, as can be seen the main study reasons for career was dominated by under 26 years old students whilst for interest mostly given by over 49 ager. The employer support received the most by under 26 students which time off and help with fees have been considered.

Regarding to the data, firstly the most dominating age category on career as the main reason was under 26 students which noted at 80 people while for interest only at 10 people. The next highest age range that used career as study reason was people at 26-29 years old which marked at 70 people while interest reason only at 15 people. Reversely, there were almost balance even balanced between career and interest as the reasons of study specifically 30-30 and 40-49 ager. Then people over 49 sharply contrast with the former age range that interest reason was three times higher than career reason approximately.

On the other hand, the most positive movement age range that accepted the employers support had to be in under 26 years old at 63 people totally. The second highest trend was in 26-29 ager that stood at 50 people. Both ranges was followed by remaining age ranges which were 30-38, 40-49, and over 49 ager which noted around 30-49 people respectively.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 463, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'ager' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'agers'.
Suggestion: agers
...st for interest mostly given by over 49 ager. The employer support received the most...
^^^^
Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[5]
Message: You should probably use: 'were'.
Suggestion: were
...er that stood at 50 people. Both ranges was followed by remaining age ranges which ...
^^^
Line 5, column 301, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'ager' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'agers'.
Suggestion: agers
...es which were 30-38, 40-49, and over 49 ager which noted around 30-49 people respect...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, regarding, second, so, then, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 965.302439024 134% => OK
No of words: 264.0 196.424390244 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89772727273 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34872616062 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492424242424 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.0 283.868780488 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.5378027176 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.545454545 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304942677676 0.215688989381 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145006975367 0.103423049105 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143188107327 0.0843802449381 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230395375431 0.15604864568 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.17880757015 0.0819641961636 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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